Looking to create large format prints as a series. Could use opinions on this art before creating more. Probably print on canvas-type paper. Thanks.
Submitted on 12/6/2009, JCats82
looking for general feedback. pros and cons.
Submitted on 10/20/2009, tightrope
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JCats82 says: Not sure what you did on this. Did you photoshop the map on her body. If yes, really nice job! I'd loose the gradient in the movie title type tho. Think about getting rid of the plane on the type too. I think the reader already understands that the movie is about travel based on the map. Otherwise really compelling image.
evergreengraphics says: i think its sick, but maybe realign the title/info a little lower? a clear rear shot would be a very pulling focus for a movie poster especially, maybe recrop? lower on the top? anyway, I love it! so sick.
what do yall think of this so far?
Submitted on 9/3/2009, Dezignstar
PickledBeatnik says: Looks nice, but there's just a little too much going on. Good incorporation of imagery and hierarchy via size and placement, though. I think the bright light coming out of the word "imagination" should be toned down a bit, as it's distracting and taking away from the readability of the message. The extra writing emulating from the girl is superfluous, as she's already the strongest and most framed of the piece. The other elements could be toned back too to add more depth without having to add any more imagery. Overall it's a solid design, engaging, has a complete structure. Good job!
