Kimbo Slice
The challege i am facing is that i feel maybe the effects are too much and the darkness of the overall art...let me know your thoughts.
Submitted on 12/27/2011, Dezignstar
m_ansoorian says: agree with your thoughts.
i think it's hard to make out what is happening in the inner area.
suggestion: maybe re-identify what it is you want me to look at.
create an order of importance, and build from there.
i bet it looks better larger tho. reducing it to this size sorta blends the elements.
Dezignstar says: thanks for ur feed, yes the image is a lot better at a larger size, will take ur input and try to create a more defined viewing area....
looking for general feedback. pros and cons.
Submitted on 10/20/2009, tightrope
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JCats82 says: Not sure what you did on this. Did you photoshop the map on her body. If yes, really nice job! I'd loose the gradient in the movie title type tho. Think about getting rid of the plane on the type too. I think the reader already understands that the movie is about travel based on the map. Otherwise really compelling image.
evergreengraphics says: i think its sick, but maybe realign the title/info a little lower? a clear rear shot would be a very pulling focus for a movie poster especially, maybe recrop? lower on the top? anyway, I love it! so sick.
Dezignstar says: yea if u added the map to her back...must say GOOD JOB...i am not feeling the font choices and the way the text is laid out on the bottom along with the plane going through the title....the image itself is pretty strong...and just needs the right font style and placement to bring it all in together.
what do yall think of this so far?
Submitted on 9/3/2009, Dezignstar
PickledBeatnik says: Looks nice, but there's just a little too much going on. Good incorporation of imagery and hierarchy via size and placement, though. I think the bright light coming out of the word "imagination" should be toned down a bit, as it's distracting and taking away from the readability of the message. The extra writing emulating from the girl is superfluous, as she's already the strongest and most framed of the piece. The other elements could be toned back too to add more depth without having to add any more imagery. Overall it's a solid design, engaging, has a complete structure. Good job!
Dezignstar says: thank you soo mcuh, i appreciate the feedback...back to the drawing board :)
